A Piece About Winter

       This piece was written sometime in September.  I can't tell if I like it or not.  I know that there are certain lines that I do like, but I don't know if I should fix up the piece or scratch it and just steal a few lines.  There's something about it though that made me want to post it... Maybe because it's almost winter!!

(  Title-less :(  )

The silence of winter rings in my ears,

As my footprints fade in the snow.

The trees shiver,

though the snow weighs their branches,

and gives them a blanket of hope.

The heartbeat of winter stays constant and clear,

Each snowflake a beat to its pulse.

The fire stays fluid and warm, like the blood that blesses that pulse.