Another Poem That I'm Not Quite Sure About...

I feel like this is... juvenile and very mediocre.  But... I still do see potential.  Again: Advice, Ideas, Anything!!!!!! Constructive criticism?

(Title..?)

Paper cranes and words of hope.

Peace

Inspire

Honor.

Thoughts of people

coexisting.

Loving one another.

But hopes, dreams, and love lie.

Things that just can't be.

We set our hearts apart from us

and move mechanically.

Love:

lost. Loyalty:

failed. Trust:

broken...

Preprogrammed minds full of hate

and truthlessness and woe.

But here we are...

Let's do the impossible.